SUMMER
The sunny sun shines through
Waves glisten from the sun
Summer dancing in the air
Around the Christmas atmosphere
Toes burning in the sand
Sandcastle building hand by hand
Swimming in the cold water river
Get out at night time try not to shiver
I used rhyme to make it sound good. I used rhythm to have a beat to it and I used alliteration to add more theme to it.
SOLO I think I achieved is relational because I can't identify all of the poems language poem that they is to use in your poem
SOLO I think I achieved is relational because I can't identify all of the poems language poem that they is to use in your poem
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