Friday 28 August 2015

Rebecca's speach


WALT: I can create complex sentences to make my writing more interesting.
I used this to make sentences sound better and I used short sentences like face it! to make more impact in the listeners mind.

My next step is to look up more and pause more.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Becca
    I liked how you explained everything clearly and in precise detail. I hope that you can pause and look up more, before the speech compition.
    Sammy!

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