Thursday, 3 September 2015

Rebecca's speach

WALT: I can create complex sentances to make my writing more interesting.

This is an example of one of my sentences that  is a complex:

sport is good for you, it gets you running around, also it helps you make new friends.

The part that makes it a complex sentence is the also becuse it makes what could have been two sentences one. 

My next step is to get into a new wriying group.

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