Friday, 23 May 2014

WALT: Make use on prior knowledge

                                                        Escape from Sarau
Sunday June 1882 today Emilie decided it was her great escape she has a lot of family and lots of visitors come to their house and she thinks her life is boring. She hates we're she lives. She has brothers that ask many questions and she shares a room with her younger sister and baby brother.


We had to read the book 'Escape from Sarau' and put down nearly every detail.
My next step is get more detail and summarise it to tell Miss O

Thursday, 17 April 2014

ComicBook!

Made with "ComicBook!" iPod touch app

Wednesday, 16 April 2014

infuence.s

WALT: Identify what goes in a good information report.
WALT: Use linking sentences to join our paragraphs                                                              
Making Choices
Decisions- We all have to make them but sometimes they aren't to easy.Things that influence our choices can be very close to you and some can just be the t.v, like family, friends, role models and Media.
                                     Family has one of the biggest impacts on our decisions.
Our family can be a big influence on decisions like if you have any siblings they might have something on like sort or dance that you have to go to when you to do your own things. Or they might have rules or don't want to do somethings that you may ask them to do.
                                                    Friends can clash with family time too.
They might smoke or want to go to the mall all of a sudden when you know you shouldn't and that's a bad influence.
             Role models can stop you smoking and doing bad things if they are a good Role model.
because you look up to them and you want to be like them and they make good choices or decisions.
             You can see and hear people who are Role models all around the world by Media.
If you hear see or talk about something people want that even if it doesn't sound to good. People like to be the best out of everybody or want to fit in and it doesn't help being influenced to by something of the the t.v that's probably not that good.
So when you make a very hard decision you should think twice about all the influence's  and be sure to make the right one.

My next step for writing is continue to join my sentences.

Tuesday, 8 April 2014

Sherlock homes

WALT:comment on connections between visual and verbal text

We have to read it two pages without looking at the words and write a summary without looking at the picture gob back and read the words and see the diffrence 

Next step understand how to read the colours of the picture knowing what the writer is trying to tell us

Thursday, 3 April 2014

My goals- 3.4.14

My academic goal- to know my spelling words I got wrong in my test by the end of term

My social goal- say good morning to people more often 

My leadership goal- remember to go to student council and share more ideas


Wednesday, 2 April 2014

WALT: Identify several visual and verbal features in advertisements; and explain the impact they have on the overall message.I can explain what would happen if another part was added or taken away.

 The add is for lams cat food                                                                                                                 The targeted audience: Cat lovers or people who has cats
It provides: that the cat loves the food because it's tail is in a love heart that it is eating lams food   
I like this add because I am a animal lover
My next step is to meet my extended abstract by finishing and identify as many visual and verbal features that you can.

Friday, 28 March 2014

Joining paragraphs

WALT: use linking sentences to join our paragraphs

Here is an example of two paragraphs that I have linked together with linking sentences. This is from my information report - Making Choices.

"Decisions - We all have to make them but sometimes they aren't too easy. Things that influence our choices can be close to you and some can just be the TV, like family, friends, role models, and media.

Family has one of the biggest impacts on our decisions."

As you can see I joined these paragraphs by relating it to the end of the first paragraph (both mention the word family).

My next learning step is: to try and use across all learning.