Sunny Adelaide

                                                             Sunny Adelaide
What could be better... we were in sunny Adelaide on the beautifully brown Murry river. It was afternoon weather. Hot and stuffy more like noisy cockatoos were floating on the rocky cliffs barking there heads off. I had this feeling my stomach started to turn like a toilet being flushed. Sweet trembled down my face as I walked to the end of the houseboat. I was getting ready for frightening flip of the boat. Mum had my Ipod and pressed record. As I turned back the houseboat looked so big like a monster watching over me. I turned back to face the yucky brown water. As I leaped of with a little run up I was soon in the refreshing cold brown water. It was so uncomfortable it was like my life jacket had wet wood shoved into it. I stayed in the murky water until my parents very bravely wanted to get into the jacuzzi as it was 42 degrees outside. As I walked up the steps I melted like a piece of ice being put into a hot chocolate. I walked to the jacuzzi I put my leg in slowly and took it out very quickly. Now I can see why there was nobody in it, the jacuzzi was on 40 degrees. So I went back into the murky brown river water.

My next step: is to keep elaborating my ideas

WALT: Make use on prior knowledge

                                                        Escape from Sarau

Sunday June 1882 today Emilie decided it was her great escape she has a lot of family and lots of visitors come to their house and she thinks her life is boring. She hates we're she lives. She has brothers that ask many questions and she shares a room with her younger sister and baby brother.

We had to read the book 'Escape from Sarau' and put down nearly every detail.

My next step is get more detail and summarise it to tell Miss O

ComicBook!

Made with "ComicBook!" iPod touch app

infuence.s

WALT: Identify what goes in a good information report.
WALT: Use linking sentences to join our paragraphs                                                              
Making Choices
Decisions- We all have to make them but sometimes they aren't to easy.Things that influence our choices can be very close to you and some can just be the t.v, like family, friends, role models and Media.
                                     Family has one of the biggest impacts on our decisions.
Our family can be a big influence on decisions like if you have any siblings they might have something on like sort or dance that you have to go to when you to do your own things. Or they might have rules or don't want to do somethings that you may ask them to do.
                                                    Friends can clash with family time too.
They might smoke or want to go to the mall all of a sudden when you know you shouldn't and that's a bad influence.
             Role models can stop you smoking and doing bad things if they are a good Role model.
because you look up to them and you want to be like them and they make good choices or decisions.
             You can see and hear people who are Role models all around the world by Media.
If you hear see or talk about something people want that even if it doesn't sound to good. People like to be the best out of everybody or want to fit in and it doesn't help being influenced to by something of the the t.v that's probably not that good.
So when you make a very hard decision you should think twice about all the influence's  and be sure to make the right one.

My next step for writing is continue to join my sentences.

Sherlock homes

WALT:comment on connections between visual and verbal text

We have to read it two pages without looking at the words and write a summary without looking at the picture gob back and read the words and see the diffrence 

Next step understand how to read the colours of the picture knowing what the writer is trying to tell us

My goals- 3.4.14

My academic goal- to know my spelling words I got wrong in my test by the end of term

My social goal- say good morning to people more often 

My leadership goal- remember to go to student council and share more ideas

WALT: Identify several visual and verbal features in advertisements; and explain the impact they have on the overall message.I can explain what would happen if another part was added or taken away.

 The add is for lams cat food                                                                                                                 The targeted audience: Cat lovers or people who has cats
It provides: that the cat loves the food because it's tail is in a love heart that it is eating lams food   
I like this add because I am a animal lover
My next step is to meet my extended abstract by finishing and identify as many visual and verbal features that you can.